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| Song of the Storm | |
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| Topic Started: Oct 25 2009, 12:50 AM (178 Views) | |
| Elecatal | Oct 25 2009, 12:50 AM Post #1 |
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This is one of my less powerful poems, but one of my favorites ^-^ Thunder booms its symphony The raindrops sing a song And I just sit here writing As I try to sing along. The breezes croon the chorus I hum the melody And as the storm is raging I am everything but me. I am in the water That’s flowing down my cheek The tapping twigs and branches That try to match the beat. I am in the lightning That’s been flashing from the start Perfectly in time With the beating of my heart. I am with the wolves As they sing a separate tune And run along beside them Beneath the shrouded moon. I am swaying with the trees As they dance and sing along To another stormy verse In this wild untamed song. |
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| aphrodite | Oct 25 2009, 07:13 AM Post #2 |
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I enjoyed your poem. I love thunder and lightning and this stirs up some of the senses that you feel in a storm. .... did you write this? |
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| Elecatal | Oct 25 2009, 08:33 AM Post #3 |
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Yah ^-^ I'm glad you liked it, I'll probably have another one up later today.
Edited by Elecatal, Oct 25 2009, 08:36 AM.
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| StEC | Oct 25 2009, 07:45 PM Post #4 |
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That was beautiful, well done! Maybe your poems will inspire others here to start writing again! |
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| zzzzzzzuhlast | Oct 26 2009, 05:59 PM Post #5 |
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Very nice, hope you post more of them. |
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| ProKlowner | Dec 18 2009, 02:12 PM Post #6 |
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Awesome poem, maybe I'll get inspired by it, I did write a short work of fiction but it never got anywhere really, and everything lately has gone into my magazine, that I hope to get published before Christmas. Edited by ProKlowner, Dec 18 2009, 02:13 PM.
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